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Live and Let Live

Ever do some assitance
Never be a hindrance.

Ever do a commendable act
Never be a despicable dude

Ever be humane to needy
Never be a brutal monster

Ever brighten one's life
Never eclipse other's prospects

Ever be a workaholic
Never be an alcoholic!

Ever be water to reflect and carry the sunshine
Never be pebbles to eliminate and withhold grace.

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  • SeaWithYourHeart gold member
    August 14, 2007

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    wow this is very nice i love your use of opposites and togetherbness in your poem and your free verse two line format
    well done good luck
    and thankyou for entering