So much to say.
But no way to spill the words out of my foolish mouth.
To say that I wish I could turn back.
Go back to last summer.
To you.
To me.
To us.
When you’d just know…
How your arms fit so perfectly around me.
The words out of your mouth always making me laugh.
Never being able to stay mad at you.
Your grin flashing in my mind always.
My heart melting faster than snowflakes in sunshine.
It was the most different kind of love.
The kind that catches your soul and holds on
That just don't happen twice.
The kind you just run with.
Never thinking.
I miss when you’d stay over.
And nuzzle your way into my spot on the bed.
Fight me for it and let me win.
Cuz you couldn’t stand to see me pout.
I’ll never forget the first time we kissed.
You told me I was intoxicating.
You were too fucking cute.
I couldn’t take it.
I wanted you.
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Sometimes I wish I could erase all of the memories.
All the secrets we shared under the blanket of summer stars.
The dream with the pink wedding dress.
And the way our love made me feel.
[But I can’t.]
And sometimes when the wind blows through my hair...
I can hear you laughing.
And when those songs come on the radio…
I picture you driving us out to nowhere.
And remember how my heart seemed to beat so fast.
When the night closes in
I think of you.
The games I played were never fair.
You could never win with me.
Yet, you never stopped trying.
Always waiting for me to come to my senses.
Well, I finally did.
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[And you finally came to yours.]
So, my dear. As you can see…I’m still loving you.
And I hope. Somewhere out there.
Part of you still loves me.
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Ohhh this is breathtaking! Really sad yet cute and beautifully written. Very good job.
Keep writing
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I just love this. The whole thing is wonderful doll. It's beautiful and so sad.
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oh, thank you darling! It's about someone who is very, very special to me.
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"When you’d just know…
And your arms fit so perfectly around me."
"I miss when you’d stay over.
And nuzzle your way into my spot on the bed.
Fight me for it and let me win.
Cuz you couldn’t stand to see me pout.
I’ll never forget the first time we kissed.
You told me I was intoxicating.
You were too fucking cute.
I couldn’t take it.
I wanted you."
"And sometimes when the wind blows through my hair.
I can hear you laughing.
And when those songs come on the radio…
I picture you driving us out to nowhere.
And remember how my heart seemed to beat so fast.
And when the night closes in.
I think of you."
this was so real.
and I can relate completely to the whole "coming to your senses" thing...
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god I love pieces about summer lovin'.
the seventh staza was... incredible.
particularly this:
"Sometimes I wish I could erase all of the memories.
All the secrets we shared under the blanket of summer stars."
ahhhh. ME FUCKING TOO. -
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thank you darling!
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