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Lost in my Thoughts

I'm huddled in a corner
Cloaked in sheets of sadness
A lost mourner
Wrapped in growing madness
The sun never seems to rise
Nor does the moon seem to shine
Can't you hear my muted cries?
Why won't happiness be mine?
The darkness keeps on growing
And you just keep on talking
Lost in fear of knowing
That in my mind you're stalking
Drowing me in sorrows deep
Choking me in depression
All I do is want to sleep
To escape you and obsession
But the darkness lingers
In the depths of my soul
Strangling me with silent fingers
My mind losing control
I am thrust into an ocean
My thoughts swept into a scream
Waves of washing emotion
Rolling over me
Until I dream






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  • You Found Me
    August 2, 2007
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    wow, so many emotions :/
    This write is so raw though, you paint a vivid picture with your words.