You're a man of modern times,
kitty cat afraid of lies,
let 'em know that you don't feel a thing...
and touch me...
and touch me.
What do you do when they're not around?
How do you cry without making sound?
Do they know how fast you burning out,
do they know how fast,
you're learning now.
We're all out here selling lives,
spilling blood in our disguise.
Show 'em all how you don't feel a thing...
and touch me...
and touch me.
Please tell me what you think
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that is so cool!!!!!!!
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Hi!
I really like the lyrics. They lay so nicely
on the page. They read well with or without
sound.
Seems like the melody is right for the form.
Oh. And you're so cute. I can say that. I'm
probably your elder. lol.
I applaud your coming forth! -
ditto the other comments
i'd definitely like to hear more of this. i just love a poem/lyrics i can sink my mind into 
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You Left Me...............................
wanting to read several more verses in this poem/song. It in great in content and I like the chorus.You have the potential to be an aspiring song writer. Like I said this was great bit I felt like you had alot more to be said in this,but not to take way from what you have written. It is Amazing!!! I just want MORE of the greatness to be expressed!! Thanks for sharing this with me today!!!~~Toni~~
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Ah ... MARVELOUS!
Real wondrous intertwining art of words, voice, melody, done so lovely a capella!
Marginality, emotional distance, society's well kept secrets ... And of course "man" means all of society. And "touch" is for the cautious and tender observer: the intense touch of sight.
Well done. You need no band. The beauty lies within the whole of presentation, the bubble blanc de blanc ...
Loved it. Thank you.
Myra
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you need some drums and guitar behind you. are you in a band? Very lovely. This is the first video I've watched on here. Well done
Creatress
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I'd like to be in a band. Never followed through with it though. I was thinking I should rewrite the whole song. Especially because it sounds like I'm asking a man of modern time to touch me. Which isn't really the intent of the song. I just thought it flowed better. Ah art. What sacrifices shall I make before your alter?
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
that was so neat
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Nice..
Hearing it does make a difference, at least for me. I like to hear how the poet/writer actually intends a poem to sound, as generally each person has a way of reading it in their own voice.
"Do they know how fast you burning out?
I liked.
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Excellent poem and video to match.
D.D.M.
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