Arriving from Va, Gina framed knee against oak,
peeling back fruit... juices skeeted.
Firm grip while mind drift,
forced seed to plummet to floor.
Lifting tart to lips, she sucked.
In a list
A contest entry
- Thirsty??????Quickie ~ 10 x 30 x 20 ~ ( Over 18 ONLY! ) by Celticmoon.
300 points, ended August 2, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Shocked no !
But boy you sure know how to write!
Mind a gog with this one
Julie x -
A softer take that can be take in a few ways when reading. Truly an enjoyable piece of work when the mind can wonder in various directions from words and images created. Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
Bel
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great take on the prompt...
excellent poem!
Lynda
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this is one poem worth its weight in juice
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Interesting take on the prompt and interestingly written, best of luck...scott
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Wonderful take on the poem. Well written and to the point.
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Very interesting take on the prompt well done. Best of luck to you
Tory
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