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Situations

as i lay here

i close my eyes

and to God I pray,

for the strength

and will

to carry on

just another day.



oh my heart

is wreaping with sadness

pressure

and fear,

i am lost

feeling hopeless

my plea for help is sincere.



i wish

i hope

i pray,

that all of these situations

will soon float away.

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  • Junkyard
    June 25, 2009
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    i can relate to this...wonderful poem...


  • musicmanjustify
    June 24, 2009

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    I believe that's what it's for: Expression. You have captured a feeling here that everubody can relate to at some point in their lives (which is what makes it so powerful). I really enjoy your work!