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Over-Used Verb

I wrote a song
That you will never hear
It was a song
Talking about fear
And things you feel
When you feel
Like an overused verb
Like walk
How you walk all over me
Like stomp
And beat
Like kiss
And leave
Admit it
I am your overused verb
Kind of like
My mascara running away from my eyes
You running away from my life
Sitting here
Attacking
My paper
Wishing it were you
Wishing it would bruise
Like me
Like you bruising me
Admit it
I am just A stupid verb
Not important enough
To be a noun
Much less

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  • Heartbeatsxfading
    August 2, 2007

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    wow.....

    I love the power and emotion in this. my favorite part was the last few parts....

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