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Trouble sleeping maybe?

Its 4am and im pacing back and forth
staring at the sheets. feeling the sweetness of
of the feathery softness. i think to my self 'damn whats wrong?'

i start to drift away.
till the smell of coffee awakes me from my lovely paradise.
i lay down only to see the clock blinks 4:30 and my eyes are still open wide.

My thoughts are jumbled. I pace the floor again.
The ticking of clock grows louder and louder
and the little hand moves slowly to a halt.

Screaming, i run down the stairs only to infinite beds.
I hear the fluff of the egyptian cotton sheets call my name. Taunting me...

8am rolls around, im in the corner wondering how i got there.
The birds are chirping unbelievably loud.
I stare at the bed, it smirks at me. "I won!" it laughs.

Author notes

lol this isnt meant to be serious like everything else is. i wanted to be a little goofy for once..because this almost happened but i went to sleep too soon for the bed to win (opt. 10)
yo yo yo wats happenin

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  • Danna Hobart
    September 2, 2007
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    Hmmm... this may be a bit too prosey for this contest. I like the last line though.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    August 12, 2007

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    a wonderful write which was expressive and full of thought and emotions and made me think
    well done and best of luck


  • lexie like woah
    August 2, 2007

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    I like this poem, its funny... i have fights withym bed all the time, i know how you feel... stupid beds, i tried to tell my mom that my bed is evil!
    thx for entering the contest and good luck!