I am beauty
sprung from the deep
just now;
I have always been.
petal yearns,
pollen pleads
to be carried
away
but spines of
sharp protection
surround my succulence
until passion's wind
passes over
me
In a list
A contest entry
- Quick Photo Prompt , Write right away! PIF by hoodoolover.
600 points, ended August 1, 2007, 10 entries
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Comments
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I love the feeling of being wanted contrasted with uncertain security conveyed in this poem. Its very lightly written, but has such power to it. Beautiful
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Beautifully expressed.
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Very nice job! Thanks for entering and please keep yourself anonymous til after judging, thanks!
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I have always been... I love that thought.. Awesome write, good luck in the contest.
♥
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