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Love...kills

Love
Is a dagger piercing my soul...
It's ice melting my very core
Hell's fire burning through my body
Coiling my insides sore

Love
Is ripping out my heart
Taping it up for all to see
Taking a sledgehammer to it
Leaving it there to bleed...

Love
Is a raven, omenous and grave
It is me screaming to just get away
Bleeding me dry with many red tears
I only hoped that you would stay...

Love
Is my enemy
It is my best friend
Love rules the world...
But death takes the win.

Good bye...

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  • Polkadot Cadaver
    December 16, 2007
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    Awesome

    Nice piece of work..I love the last verse.....good stuff


  • sidewinder silver member
    December 11, 2007

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    yes life has pain as well as love although sometimes if one romance doesn't work there's still a whole world out there to find another. but that's up you isn't it?
    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill