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Go ahead and cry...

Tense, deep breath
Evenly exhaled
A sudden sob erupts
Reflexive, convulsive
Shuddering cry




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A short acrostic...first try at this...

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  • Ahkam silver member
    August 2, 2007
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    Nice try

    Nice , short and reflexive...Ha Deep Breath!