Sitting alone by the window, observing
As the rain falls so quickly
Putting a smile on my face
It’s beautiful, mesmerizing me
Reminding me of you, our love
How it bewitches me so
Calm and steady like the rain
We love one another passionately
Continuing to look out the window
Peace rushes over me, the sun shines
Author notes
All three options, great prompts! (I love that quote!)
In a list
A contest entry
- 10-10-20 Quickie...Creativity welcome!! by BringintheSunshine.
600 points, ended August 1, 2007, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Inspire Me - I need some sunshine and cheering up by Aussie Gypsy.
450 points, ended September 8, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is beautiful, I am glad you are able to see and feel all of the happiness the world has to offer
Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you the very best of luck
Karen -
Again, a very diserving gold trophy. So sweet this poem is. And your description of inocent love ... so amazing. I love this. I can relate to it too lol. I love reading poems like that. Especially by you. Because no one does it better!
Megan -
very good, i liked how you incorporated all three options into one poem, very creative. great job. much love and good luck in the contest!
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i think it's really neat how you put all three options together,i never would hvae thought of that, and the poem is beautiful.
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Thanks for your entry!! I realllly liked reading this. I love that you used more than one, and what's more, all three options This was a very peaceful, reflective poem... descriptive as well. You described what she was looking at and what she was thinking about, which is exactly what I hoped for this picture! I like your ideas about the quote, too. Thanks so much for your entry! Good luck to ya!
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