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And there it goes, like a splinter in the marble sky. Shooting specks of another planet to my toes.
All so my feet would burn.
Staggering, through this landmine of explosives. Eyes rolling to the back of my head, to a viewable screen of memories.

Me & you darling. Feet placed in line with each others,
You stand on the black square
I'll stand on the white.

[But wait.
Don't move me yet.


I don't want to be queen.]



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I miss those memories..


Lullaby.

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  • bird-mad girl
    August 4, 2007
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    "And there it goes, like a splinter in the marble sky."

    --That starting line is A!MAZ!ING! I completely love it. The imagery is grand and beautiful and just jdhfiauehfa stunning!

    I also really loved how this ended.
    From start to finish this piece was amazing. I'm so glad you entered this contest!

    ♥
    ily.


  • Miss Faith
    August 3, 2007
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    wow.

    just wow.


  • whiterabbit.
    August 3, 2007

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    Wow I love this. You're really a wonderful writer. I read it a few times (because I'm not really sober) sry sweetie) and it's just amazing. Beautiful poem doll.
    xx


  • Exodus gold member
    August 2, 2007
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    *staggers form the sheer force of this*
    Honey, you astound, amaze, and leave me in awe. I really hope it gets easier for you soon babe, and no more pills kay? Send me an IM if you feel heaps bad and I'll get back to you as soon as I can, ILY bunches girly


  • Simple-Fairytale
    August 2, 2007

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    Of course another from the best : ] this is really great, like, completely random, but that's what makes it...anyway, great job : ]

    ps:: I LOVE the last 3 lines <3


  • Atrophya
    August 1, 2007
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    you were fucked up on those drugs weren't you? I love you. <3 This is sheer brilliance darling.


  • They Say Shannon
    August 1, 2007

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    "Shooting specks of another planet to my toes.
    All so my feet would burn.
    Staggering, through this landmine of explosives. Eyes rolling to the back of my head, to a viewable screen of memories."

    "You stand on the black square
    I'll stand on the white.

    [But wait.
    Don't move me yet.


    I don't want to be queen.]"

    Wow,
    I just copied and pasted mainly the whole thing lol.
    This is amazing.
    You're amazing.
    You do wonderful short prose.

    BEAUTIFUL, darling.
    Great job <3

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