A rose unfurled
Reveling glorious sadness
Silently
Unique sorrows
Dance as lost shadows on the moon
Carelessly
Disharmony
Life seems morass in swirls of dark
Endlessly
A rose bleeding
Dissected form of true being
Perishes
A contest entry
- "Felt" poetry. ONLY by shirk.
1500 points, ended October 8, 2007, 110 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So VERY deep! Wonderfully penned piece of sullen taste. Beautiful!
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Spunky! You taste like bunnies...
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well done and well said. it is such a vivid poem and your words make it stand out and everyone has to take notice. great job. Love, Tracy
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Bravo! my dear friend. This has true feelings behind it. and I hope you are not feeling like this.
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A beautifully written piece. it's full of emotions, like:
Disharmony
Life seems morass in swirls of dark
Endlessly
Like things keep going in circles and circles until at last, like in the last stanza, it as you say "perishes", or dies. Great write!
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Amazing....Beautiful..I adore the emotion in this write...
beautiful imagery as well..
Peace and best wishes
~A~
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wow this flowed beautifull and wonderfully. the imagery and emotions were strong and captivating. well done and best of luck
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This is beautiful and flows so smoothly. The imagery is a bit dark yet inviting. Nicely written. Good luck in the contest.
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Great job here....full of emotion and awesome imagery.....you always seem to bring a lot in your writing...best of luck in this contest...smiles, Terry
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