The perfect kiss,
Her softest lips,
Have me on my knees,
She taste's like strawberries,
What more do I need?
One more feed..
..of her strawberries.
Author notes
mmmmm strawberries..
Please tell me what you think
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This reminds me of something i've read before
my friend once wrote a haiku about strawberry danishes and how her boyfriend tastes like one xD
i believe that this is the best form of poetry.
when you can say what you want to say
in as little lines as possible
so simply.
i am in love with this poem -
Wow,so so so AMAZING.hah,you write rather well
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Hah soo sweet
Love it.
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Awesomeness
Awwww... Its so cute..... I like it... wait.... .....no...............
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..........................Loved it!!!!!
lmao.... looks like you found a girl
that you like congrats! I liked it.....
short and sweet.... just like strawberries!!!!!! lmao... Bravo... Keep it up mister!!!!!
And I mean it... keep ur head held high
and I hope things work out for the best between u and this girl...
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awwwwww this is a really cute poem. i really like it :]
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It's cute, good job
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hmm I love this its got a sauciness to it lol very well written I loved it
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aww cuuute.
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awesome!!
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Love it!! lol!!
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I think this is so sweet, but your author notes are curious, if you don't give a shit what anyone thinks then why did you put it in shameless? Oh well, I do think this is a sweet write.... nice job.
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whisper
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wat the "mmmmmm stawberries"? i didnt write tht so ppl wud get it..it was written for only one person..only me and her understand it(properly). but thnx anyways..
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*blushes* oh sweety... if only my strawberry lips could be on yours... I loved this... Thank you sweety... I love you...
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