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Dreaming

inside the dreamers dream i stayed,
brought out a pen and wrote dismay.
upon the eagles back i flew,
picked out the feathers, two by two.
beside the fire i reside,
moved my palms to confide.
under ground with space and time,
wrapped around to my design.
inside the dreamers dream i stayed,
reality gone, the price i paid.

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liked this one, how i feel sometimes when im writing... lost in thought sort of thing (^_^)

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  • Thedamned77
    August 2, 2007

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    Amazing

    You are so incredible!! This is one of my favorites. So abstract...I love the lines inside the dreamers dream i stayed reality gone, the price i paid. It's so open to interpretation. i love it.