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Summer Rain

Summer rain,
Like warm tears heating my face
light up the world for my eyes.
i see the dew, smell the water all around
such a wonderful fragrance.
I fly to the clouds
they cover me up in moist, warm tears
As i watch the sunset drift into twilight stars,
and singing angels carry me home in my sleep.

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little wierd, but oh well...

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  • SkepticalXSuicide
    August 7, 2007
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    I think

    I think it is beautiful. =]


    • Eternalsyn16
      August 7, 2007
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      thank you for your comment, always enjoy it when someone reads my stuff (^_^)