O' on gal of eve, here comes the Autumn night
teetering on summer's flamboyant end
gypsy lassy.. black eyed Susan
untamed as the mahogany in her eyes
under the harvest moon crisp melancholy winds
peppering the vacant feilds
stars twinkle in her trance
pay no mind my little vagabond
to the caravan of tambourine's
swaying your butterscotch petals unsettled
Author notes
Written September 5th, 2003
A contest entry
- Blossoms by Ms. Trick.
300 points, ended September 7, 2003, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hmmmm Mina Sweety Pea on the other sea,
won't you come and with me on a mod days shiny breeze,
swish and sway as the grass rolls in winds,
buttercup stains on the pale Maidens skin,
tickles and giggles in Gods sunshiny light,
passing to dreams under pale moonbeams sight,
wake in the morning to the sofy feathered tickeles,
the dewdrops of flower petals slowly down thee cheek trickles,
and breathe of the air of a good mornings day,
sofltly awakened to a buttercups day..... :),
just a corny little one for ya Sweety Pea. me loved the new pictures and OC as you can see me loves buttercups and fields of green as well, thank you for the dreamy moment sweety Pea,
Muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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love yas sweety Pea,
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joe -
Me wishes there was a 'Dawn' flower~~ then this could have been about me LOL
This was just so beautiful~~ 'butterscotch petals'~~ that was just so beautiful the way you said that Mina
And you girl are gonna have a pretty row of trophies on your page aren't you???
I loved this Mina~~ I only wish you wrote more girl
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Ahhhhh
You wrote a flower named after me lol
How sweet
Excepting I got hazel eyes
Loved this
Your right I adore the pic
Love you hun
Catching up now lol
Love you sweetie
Susan~~~~~
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Love the impression left on my mind of my favorite wild flower, so abundant this time of year, here in Maine. Beautiful write! Thank you for your comments on my poems, And yes, I'd love some chowdah, want me to bring the clams? Brown eyed susans, refreshing autumn breezes, and a hello to my fellow downeaster.
*Di*
Edited on Sep 10 because ''. -
Stunning!! I loved this. So visual and as always done like a master. I'm so jealous hehehe. Best of luck in the contest hun. Blessed be
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Mina
Aaaaaaaawwwwwwww how pretty
, Oh, I just love those floweres, and you described them just perfectly 
Good luck in contest
Love you,
Karen
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