To have Christ’s eyes is to see suffering,
To see pain,
To see thing you cannot change,
And thing we can,
And to know the difference.
It is to see people refusing your help,
And to see people accepting it.
It is to give things up,
and receive things in return,
It is to see war,
And to see peace,
It is to see death,
And to see birth.
It is to see everything,
And to see nothing.
Author notes
Witten March 9 2005 for a religion project. However most of it is BS, cause im Agnostic....so dont take it too seriously
Please tell me what you think
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very nice
i like the contradictions here, good work
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this is really fractured...where you change direction a bit maybe you should have a stanza break cause its hard to follow at the moment...
the ideas could maybe be devloped a bit more, this whiole poem sounds lie an extended bible quote or something...maybe a bit of metaphor, some simile...because this is ok, its simply done and gets a message across but it isn't that gripping to read...
sorry im in a ratty mood and taking it out in other peoples comments boxes...feel free to ignore me
take care xxx -
okay right away, i have a problem i dont sec hrist suffering, but thats a matter of personnal opinion. umm the rest of it i liked it because your right, he is everything and nothing... i hope that god would want the good not so much the evil but then again there would be no compassion if there was no suffering...so i get it. keep it up and i hope that this has help and you are welcome to read my stuff always looking for more comments..
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