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Lacrosse

L = Lithe
A = Awesome
C = Cool
R = Relaxing
O = Obvious
S = Sneaky
S = Scintillating
E = Energetic

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  • lol, that cracks me up. Maybe I need to get into playing lacrosse. You make it sound alot more exciting than I ever imagined it could be. I like sports.


  • lonley21poet
    January 4
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    scintillating??? i don't know this word... D


  • artsyfart13
    December 17, 2008
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    cool


  • redhanded
    December 17, 2008
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    very neat write. see it is something you like!


  • ShaantSteele
    October 26, 2008
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    I liked the format of the poem, I've never picked up a lacrosse stick so for the rest I cannot say


  • Chocolate Dime
    October 4, 2008

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    hehe i liked it! Ive done those first letter word things with stuff before, like my name. in the 3rd grade though...and ive never played alcrosse, we dont have a lacrosse team at my high school. or do we? um i dont think so anyway, nice write and take care


  • luna-midnight gold member
    September 27, 2008

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    ive always wanted to play, but i dont really know how, or had a chance to play.lol
    nice write


  • EeyoreUK
    September 22, 2008

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    Its nice to see you attempting different kinds of poetry. Well done and I hope you continue to explore the world of poetry. Jess

  • blaizenaway
    September 15, 2008
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    for me it's football. We deffinetly share a passion for sports bud. fun read


  • Kram
    August 20, 2008
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    !

    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • celadia
    July 19, 2008

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    My brother used to play lacrosse and sometimes I would play with his equipment when he was out, it sure was fun.

  • Still Gonna Shine
    May 31, 2008
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    ooo lacrosse


  • infernalxfidelity
    May 21, 2008
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    AHHHHH!! this is AWESOME! i'm bookmarking it. <3

  • kassy17
    April 24, 2008
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    lol

    wow this is cool


  • Asonine
    April 16, 2008
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    I know !

    Where are you from?


  • Asonine
    April 16, 2008
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    haha, thats awesome, I also like lacrosse... and rugby


  • tilldeathdowepart
    April 4, 2008
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    BAMB

    good one♥..loved it
    how you been..stud


  • myrataal silver member
    March 30, 2008

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    I love acrostics ...

    and this one is as you say, self explanatory ... and passionately done ...

    Blessed be.

    Myra


  • HugsForEveryone
    March 29, 2008

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    cool! This was wonderful. I love how you used a single powerful word for every line. Nice job. Keep writing.

    ~Pandy~


  • Kaylee Alexandria
    March 24, 2008
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    haha nice i take it you like lacrosse? =]

  • Cibtastic
    March 16, 2008

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    Lacrostic.


    This is cute, though. You must be really dedicated to your sport to write so much poetry about it.


  • EmptyBrokenDreams
    March 16, 2008

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    cool..it's simple and wonderful. I really like it. It made me laugh and i kept reading it over and over cuz i really honestly loved this simple write. It Rocks!


  • eleno
    March 14, 2008

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    oh this is a good one, being able to say a lot in just a few words is a talent. I personally am not a fan of acrostics, but some poems simply make more sense that way. this one did. -eleno


  • DeadlyPoetic88
    March 13, 2008

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    Ha my brother totally agreed with this. He plays lacrosse in a league. Soon to be a actual sport here in America woot. Lol I liked this.

    dani

    Hope all is going well...no more stalker.


  • Whitaker
    March 7, 2008
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    I like it because it's simple but also has a lot of thought. I'm gonna read more of your stuff.


  • z etoile
    February 27, 2008
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    Cool I liked how you wrote you name out here totally awesome!


  • The White Rabbit
    January 22, 2008

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    love lax! its my fav, well one of my fav sports ever. I'm a goalie though, but it used to be my life. I msis it so much, but I'd never tell my bitchy coach that. SHe made me choose between singing and lacrosse, and I had to choose lacrosse (because of a long story, she essentally screwed me over) but anyway. Nice! i love people writing about sports. awesome job you totally caught the essense of lacrosse in your poem. with love and giggles, the white rabbit


  • insainebuni
    January 9, 2008
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    i loveeeeeeeeee Lacrosse!!!!!!!!!!


  • raggyann
    December 8, 2007
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    this was realy cool
    i like this

  • celadia
    November 16, 2007
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    My brother used to play lacrosse so I think you've mostly got it down as to what its about.


  • Amythest Rose
    November 12, 2007

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    Uhhhhh i thought Lacrosse was a sport that posh woman played well really i don't know what it is but the poem was cool expressing the way you find the sport to your liking well done keep it up oh and by the way kool username


  • DrunkenRam
    November 9, 2007
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    Guilty Everbody's guilty

    Take away the stupid white man's rules and lacrosse is a lotta fun.


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    October 18, 2007

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    cool, havent seen many acrostics, but I like the form of poetry. I liked this one it had a powerfullness behind it


  • cafegroundzero gold member
    October 1, 2007
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    Ah ha, very nice

    Thank you for sharing that one.

    How about you expand on it?

    Let me try one:

    Sending the ball man to man.
    Over the crunchable turf
    Cross over foot-sent missile
    Crack! the kick past escapes one
    Evading another by dribbling
    Right into the effin' goal!


  • Angel Full Of Hurt
    September 28, 2007

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    nice ...words stand for what...cool

    i like it...keep this up yo...don't stop...
    use the talents God have given you...
    U know God bless you with talents ...sooo...keep writing...because i like what you do...


  • Daizy21
    September 23, 2007
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    This is refreshing, wow, short simple but powerful,thank you for this...


  • Lilyflowersinspring
    August 27, 2007
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    I like the word choice in this poem...its nice.


  • JustWhoIAm
    August 25, 2007
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    Yes

    CR


  • Wesley Storer
    August 25, 2007
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    O.K.

    Pretty clever. Did you write this?


  • Jalalbad gold member
    August 8, 2007
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    I commend you

    highly on this one. These are the kind I could never do.
    Smile,
    Judy


  • LuchiaNanami
    August 1, 2007

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    I like this poem

    Does anyone know what these kind of poems are called. Because, I've been searching for what these poems are called...sorry...but I like this! I did one just like this.


  • RuLives4GodOnly
    August 1, 2007

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    Awesome write! Although I hate all sports with a passion, I liked this a lot. Shows that you have the creativity and patience to write this poem. Quite nice!

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