i see the stars and shapes of oceans,
i feel the breeze above this sphere.
this midnight lies inside our minds,
the morning comes outside our tears.
i lift my hand and trace her lips,
my fingers find her hair.
then twilight comes to kiss the rain,
our souls slide closer, my heart bare.
this tourniquet is fading fast,
my breath is rapid,
it just wont last.
then time awakes and grinds it's clocks,
we sadly part, my lips find lace.
were further now,
to our disgrace.
Author notes
this one is for Thedamned77 (^_^)
A contest entry
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360 points, ended August 16, 2007, 69 entries
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I LOVE YOU!!! That is an amazing poem my love and i feel you. Is that one about me?
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