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Guilty as charged.

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As I stand in the court room
all covered in guilt,
my hands shaking badly...
now look what I've spilt,
the beans so they say,
were not mine to be sure,
so my future my friends,
is behind a locked door.




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Spilling the beans.

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  • squeezy
    August 16, 2007

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    Ha ha.

    Nice and naughty- it reminded me of the film 'Chicago'- kind of coy but almost loving the attention. Someone who can't help but spill the beans even if it means prison. Short, sharp and witty.


    • cutiepie gold member
      August 16, 2007
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      Thank you Enjoy writing these humourous poems, lifts the spirit


  • tawk gold member
    August 2, 2007
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    A very thought provoking write. Wow, I loved it


    • cutiepie gold member
      August 3, 2007
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      Thank you ...had fun writing this one must be the devil in me


  • Vampstress
    August 2, 2007

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    I liked this but please read the rules again as it would be a shame to have to DQ this. Thanks for taking the time to enter my contest.
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