THIS HAND HAS HELD LIFE ,DEATH
JOY AND PAIN
SO REMEMBER MY FRIEND
SHOULD EVER IT BEGIN TO RAIN
ITS ALWAYS "HERE " IF YOU
NEED ONE TO BORROW
PLEASE LET IT HELP YOU
RELIEVE YOUR SORROW
TINY THO IT MAY BE'
LIKE OUR FRIENDSHIP,
STRONG AS AN OLD OAK TREE..
SO PLEASE MY FRIEND..
REACH OUT YOURS TO ME..
LET ME DO WHAT" YOU'VE"
DONE FOR ME!!!!!
A contest entry
- Pay it forward - the real thing by Dienush.
1800 points, ended August 6, 2007, 17 entries
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I'VE JUST STARTED WRITTING AND THERE HAVE BEEN TWO PEOPLE ON HERE THAT HAVE INSPIRED ME HERE AND IN MY PERSONAL LIFE FOR THE PAST TWO YEARS, IT WAS A VERY BUMPY TIME IN MY LIFE.. AND THEY WERE ALWAYS KEEPING ME GOING NEVER LETTING ME DOWN NOW THEY ARE HAVING TO DEAL WITH THIER OWN SITUATIONS AND I WANTED TO SHOW THEM ITS MY TURN TO BE THERE FOR THEM .. THANK YOU FOR GIVING ME THE SPACE IN YOUR CONTEST TO LET THEM KNOW I LOVE THEM VERY MUCH...
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