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innocent

I didn't do it,
I was home,
Not near her.

She fucked another guy!
She put my shit in her!

Well, she had that dropper,
just, shoved it in there,
and squeezed...

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guy accused of rape.
((his day in court, what he would say))

A contest entry

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  • Vampstress silver member
    August 2, 2007

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    I like this, kind of scattered like he is guilty but trying to plead innocent. Nice job. Thanks for taking the time to enter my contest.
    V.


  • Abv. 01101001
    August 1, 2007

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    Oh wow. I wouldn't know how anyone could really deffend that side either...
    Good luck in the contest.