Take me away!
Let my empty heart
Float on the wings of
Words
And come to rest
In a land of
Hope
Where dreams play
And giggles
Dance
On the wind.
Where alliterations
And rhymes
Tease and taunt,
Always within reach.
Where riddles
And explanations
Breathe free.
My heart,
Filling upon descent
Will at last find
Peace
In a land that
Only exists in
My mind.
Author notes
For a long time I've been afraid to write. This was my plea for my utopia that is writing.
A contest entry
- Where the mind drifts by Danna Hobart.
375 points, ended February 11, 2008, 18 entries
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i absoluely LOVED THIS POEM!!!!!!!!it was awesome and creative and exactly what i was looking for!you put a smile on my face and joy in my heart!
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Thanks for entering.
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"let my empty heart float on the wings of words..." really liked this opening line. and the ending line left you with a peace. i knew you had happy writing in you!
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I can't help but wonder, why exactly are you afraid to write?
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A wonderful place, indeed
but never a Utopia
for utopias (Utopiae?) don't exist by the very nature of the name.
Wonderful though...
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