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Nature's voice(haiku chain)





grass as whispered tones
caresses the voice of wind
silken messages
~~~
nature's voice speaks with
tongues  conversing together
golden melodies
~~~
lullaby notes sung
from nightingale's throat tunes
purely innocent.



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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 23, 2007

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    Very pretty

    grass whispers to us through the wind,nice visions of the blades flowing gently...good luck in our contest thank you for entering..MM


  • sandgoddess
    August 20, 2007
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    beautiful ku!

    rachel


  • Lyrical Rain
    August 6, 2007

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    This Haiku is very peacful and beautiful. Grass as whispered tones, wow what a comparison. Thanks for the comment on my poem I Surrender and I'll change the "cause" to "because" as soon as possible


  • tawk gold member
    August 2, 2007

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    What a beautiful Haiku. So serene and peaceful. Such a beautiful picture you have painted for all too see


  • Harrisham Minhas
    August 2, 2007

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    It paints very serene and vivid images of nature.
    Beautifully expressed.
    Please check that there are 8 syllables in "from nightingale's throat a tune" ...you can correct it.

    Thanks for your entry.

    Harrisham Minhas


    • cutiepie gold member
      August 3, 2007
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      Thank you for the correction It has been rectified


  • just a voice
    August 2, 2007
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    Beautiful. Great gob. This is truely beautiful.


  • ScarletO gold member
    August 1, 2007

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    This is pure magic to read for it blends and flows so well together. Your words are lovely making this a romantic like feeling part of nature.


    • cutiepie gold member
      August 1, 2007
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      Thank you for your lovely comments, as always, very much appreciated

  • Aurora Ceres
    August 1, 2007

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    Oh, this is beautiful. One blends into the next wonderfully and the last is divine. Very well done.

    Best of luck to you.

    Bella

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