O You Ravishing female!!
Whose eternal beauty
Never becomes stale
You make me feel like it is my duty
To worship your heart and mind
And if you lend me your ear
You'll hear your body exquisitely defined
And perhaps out of joy you may shed a passionate tear
How I'll beg you!!
To let my fingers trace
That divine face
That is like the Lord's sky
Painted in a sunset's hues
And with my hands
I'll make those colors flow
Ever so slow
Down your twin mountain peaks
For a time that may seem like weeks
Let the orange pain of the day
Set like the Sun
And become quickly undone
So that your eyes may glow again
Like the brilliance of the moon
And let that moonshine
Reflect upon my hands work
Upon your body made of the Earth's finest clay
And watch my eyes glow like fireflies
Coming to play
Around your legs of smooth glossed ivory
Upon which my hands will carve
A swath of sensual titillation
With such skill that you might question
My daytime occupation
As I dutifully relieve the worldly stress
By performing my sweet ode to my enchanting
Terran Goddess....
Author notes
This is a quite obviously a sensual piece, I wrote this as my family and I traveled through the Southwestern United States on a road trip. I felt inspired by the mountains the sky and the sunsets that we witnessed.
I hope y'all enjoy.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired {adult content} by ennovy.
550 points, ended October 19, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful!
"Let the orange pain of the day
Set like the Sun"
"And watch my eyes glow like fireflies
Coming to play"
This radiates warmth! Nicely penned!
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Wow...very heavy and beautifully written. I liked.
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I enjoyed this piece. The images your placed within this piece were great. Great descriptions. I really liked it. Check me out sometime. - cgirl0410
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You make me feel like it is my duty To worship your heart and mind Nice Terran Goddess mountain peaks flow colors with your touch nice work here
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Beautifully Penned
In this piece you are one with the beauty and nature of the southwest, like a passionate woman enchanting you, you couldn't help but fall in love. Your words are both sensaul and divine.....Pen this piece to your page in all its magnificence....Thanks for sharing this my dynamic poet friend........your talent is explosive.................Novy
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great
great piece babe i love how you used the mountains sky and sunsets
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