Is love something you can hold on to is love a person what is love well I think love is something you need to find in a person that person has to be special someone that makes you laugh or someone who understands you, someone who likes what you like well actualy I just described friendship but love is a bit more complicated love is like.... well like I said it's complicated but there are two types of love fake teen love and true love true love is something you might receive when your friends with someone love is wonderful but it can also bite you in the butt too so just find someone and don't mess it up ok.
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Well, I like that you said you were describing friendship; because friendship I believe is a foundation for love. My boyfriend was my best friend before we started going out, and he still is and always will be.
You're right. Love is complicated, even when you're in love, it's still complicated.
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I like the way you noticed you described friendship. I think love is, first and foremost, friendship. I think you had some good points here, but I ran out of breath reading it. lol Perhaps separate into lines? You have great understanding for one so young, bro.
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Love is really just having a warm feeling inside for people who are closest to you such as your family and best friends. It's also about having unconditional belief in yourself and not giving up in pursue of your dreams. It means not relying on having other people around you all the time in order to be self confident. It means being helpful and supportive of others, having a positive state of mind, just being the best person you can be. There are many definitions of love, Michael. Just look in your heart and I'm sure you'll find the right one that suits you. Just never forget you're loved by many people and not alone in this world. Maybe you go through hard times with some, but who doesn't? Just never let that drown your self esteem.
Great poem.
Brian -
Honey I don't know what to say, but this is just wonderful.
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