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The White Rose

I am pure and beautiful
I am a song in the air
I am lovers first kiss
I am the white rose

I am a sweet melody
I am beauty and hope
I am an angel in flight
I am the white rose

I am your best friend
I am here forever
I am not gone
I am the white rose

I am pure
I am an angel
I am beautiful
I am the white rose

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Option 9
'man that kid made *bunny* up look cool'

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  • MD Masroor
    November 6, 2008

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    WOW! That was just beautiful! A trophy well deserved! the imagery was just asskicking! it felt so serene! a white rose is this poem itself, tranquil.


  • PaintedParisPassion
    September 1, 2007

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    i really did like this
    it was simple and sweet
    and thanks for following the rules
    thanks for entering
    thanks for sharing
    good luck!!

    :]


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    August 12, 2007

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    wow this was wonderful andcaptivating and i really enjoyed reading this it was just wonderfully written
    well done i loved this


  • Samantha-.
    August 1, 2007
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    really pretty and i just liked it. good luck in this contest.


  • Olivias Violin
    August 1, 2007
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    Very Nice!


  • sue2
    August 1, 2007
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    very lovely poem.


  • no-longer-a-member-
    August 1, 2007

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    Ah... back in the days, I had several different sites that I visited under the screen name of "Lord Whiteroses" and with this absolutely beautiful poem, you reminded me why.

    Very nice job. Very beautiful, and good luck in the contest.

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