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Silver...Happiness Bead

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The silver bead of happiness is one to behold

compared to mercurial element under control

The rise and fall of our emotions

we contain within our soul

 

Within our stem of body fire

the bubble rises to normal range

Temperatures and pressures need not rise

our happiness desires will not change

 

Should our feelings reach an explosive point

and break our stem of self control

Then happiness rolls like bead of mercury

and all is lost that be behold

 

Our mercury bead will not explode

and let our happiness roll away

If we control our boiling point

and remain cool through out the day

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  • janejainejayne gold member
    August 4, 2007
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    Lovely!

    You have captured it all in a silver bead!
    This was lovely! Jane


  • bethan-gaze
    August 4, 2007

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    It's a wonderful idea to compare the mercury with "a silver bead of happiness" ... really enjoyed reading this one ... congrats on the silver!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 3, 2007
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    Our mercury bead will not explode

    and let our happiness roll away

    If we control our boiling point

    and remain cool through out the day

    Indeed you have a true and golden message here..I love it..and thanks for such an inspiring entry in my contest..

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