Held in a vestige sought of memory,
tranquility encapsuls torn spirit,
where notional wings embrace descent.
Illusionary distinction endangers mystical visions,
to arise in tears from an invisible dream.
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Prompt: invisible dreams
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A contest entry
- PIF ..... 5 LINES by Lyre-Bird-.
410 points, ended August 1, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is better than a good take on the prompt. I know what it's like to be afraid to dream, to have invisible dreams, and have them ripped from me, before they were fully realized, and just how mind numbing that was.
Awesome job, and well deserved Bronze!
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thank you for entering the contest.....
a wonderful take on the prompt..
best of luck with your entry
Tracey
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