“My love, why are you silent” my man ask
Pondering, are my in held sensations,
Within the silence of your wondrousness
How beautiful are dreams yet they oppose
On their appearance when in the thoughts of you
I no longer want to sleep when you become my dream
I never felt the strong feelings that surprises me everyday
The love you bring you brought it well and fresh
As you stun my life and my conceited wisdom
I try to gather every breathe and every beat of my heart
Oh the sweet serenity I often try to repeat
Its sound composed in such beautiful melody
Sleep my ears, in a dream under the spell of your words
That comes as if brought by the essence of me
Within the stillness of your gazing vivid tone
That comes as if a bird has made
its first sound in dawn’s alarm
The whole liveness of that has found its own beauty
So love can I quiet for this one time
So I can know how you became and form
TO know if you, my love is real
“To know what my heart does
in the very stillness of
thy moving emotions you bring”
In a list
A contest entry
- Give me your 100th poem by Loveandblessings2u.
975 points, ended March 16, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is so beautiful,
full of emotions.
A joy to read,
very enjoyable.
Good luck in the contest/
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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I liked the content of this poem... it was very well created... and the emotion is honest and beautiful... however I really think that you need to go over this again and look out for mistakes in grammar... apart from that this was a good read
Keep writing
Polly -
This is not a rewards poem. Fix in 24 hours. Questions? Messgae me.
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wow. this is just what i was looking fr in this option, but fix ur authors comment box. put in quote and option # or ill have to dq u good poem. not that cliche love stuff. this is real
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I placed it in the coments because my I don't want to lose my font since I am not a silver member
its option 4
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Beautiful
Yes you have penned this very well love does have a heartbeat of its own
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Brilliant expression.
i loved this write, full of lovinf
volcabulary.
I can feal the whispers of your touch...
Thanks for sharing.
D. x
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There are times when silence speaks louder than a shout. This piece is very soft and whispers of romantic thoughts within the mind.
Sweet & sensual, and a well written poem. Nice job Aurielle
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This is a very beautiful piece of work. The only thing I find and I did not like are where you would make a lot of simple and most common mistakes. For example, in some of the lines, you either add more or too little, or you say the right words but misspell it, other than that, you have a great piece
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