The road of life can be a wonderful life.
A happy life.
A fantastic life.
The road of life can be whatever you want it to be.
As for me I want a tranquil life.
A life of peace and harmony.
I wish for life to be kind to all mankind.
For everyone to have their needs attended to.
I hope for world peace.
I want to see the wars end.
This is what I hope for life to be.
Everyone should be happy and have a song in their heart.
Feel happy and free as the birds and the bees.
Please tell me what you think
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AMAZING!
Wow this was just beautiful. Short, sweet and to the point. I'm breathless actually. Wonderful Job!
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!!!
Great write! Very spiritual...it reminds me of the 'walks of life animation' (http://i-am-bored.com/bored_link.cfm?link_id=24636)
Nicely done.
hugs,
Steph
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!!
Very uplifting! Your picture of the perfect world is perfect indeed. A great read! Thanks for sharing your vision with us! >pixxie<
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!!!
Fantastic!!!!! I wish life could be this way for everyone!!!! What a great read!!!! Thanks for sharing!!!!!
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!
A very good write and message. A beautiful life indeed is what you describe and hope for. Lovely sentiment and depth of feeling. Thanks for sharing.
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE
This has to be one of the most hopeful and happy poems I've read in a long time.
It is amazing how many people are actually more comfortable being miserable in life and take unknown amounts of time to make themselves so, even if they don't realize it.
Sadly, I don't see that your wish will ever completely come true...but I also believe that imagining is the first step to making anything you want, happen.
A lovely piece to wake up to this morning, and TY so much for sharing your vision with all of us!
Best wishes,
~J.
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE
This is light and happy, a feeling of taking wing in your words. I like the repetition. Well done.
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Sooo wonderful to read such positive thoughts. We all need a pick me up...This did that for me this morning. I believe that if we all read this poem and put in in our thoughts even for a minute...it just might happen
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i love this poem . it holds a strong message in the world we live in today.I know your hand and head was connect while writting this but your heart was the messenger behind it all. thank you for sharing and posting.
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WHAT A BEAUTIFUL WISH!!!!
This would indeed be a most beautiful gift for the world.
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Nice thoughts, I'd like to think you could make it, I'm a bit worried about the line "I wish for life to be kind to all mankind", I would wish for mankind to be a lot kinder to life,other than that this is a very good poem with a good theme, best wishes---Norman
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