with broken wings,
i fly.
up and up.
up towards the sky.
guess i'm still alive.
but i'm not so sure.
hell, maybe i DID die!
there is no point,
no point in trying.
to figure it all out.
my wings are broken.
so is my spirit.
and i'm just to God-damn tired,
to even shout.
i still ain't got a fucking clue.
as to what it was all about!
how so very, very, very sad.
or maybe it was just me.
i think i was just born bad.
if i could do it all over,
i'd like to think i'd change.
alot of things.
most of all me.
hey man!
don't worry about fucking me!
I WILL FUCK MYSELF!!!
i always do.
thats the only thing that holds true.
me fucking me.
it seems,
that is my reality.
gypsyFISH
just read it.
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Nice! Ya know i thought i was the only one to think that i fucked myself i allways do to Omg ! Are you sure you aint another sister from another mister? lol take care your writting is Insane but i love it
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holy sis
i'm pretty sure if we are not sister's in this life, we were in another. ha/ha love gypsyfish
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Hi gypsyfish!
I have always been my own worst problem. I have lived that life. I am a group officer of "FALLEN Angels". Come in and take a look at us. I think you would fit right in.
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thanks for reading.
what is FALLEN Angels? think i might be interested. love gypsyfish.,,
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i can relate
stale and worn out try and try again is the saying .. not try try try try try try try try try try try try try try try try again .. lol right? ... good lil wrote you have here i think most readers can relate to this on one level or another .. max clappage 2 u
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cute mayoush
hey! i haven't heard from you in a while, SO WHAT'S UP?
you better be studing!!! i may need that brain transplant later.. i'm depending on you. give me a call. love your gypso -
love it! this poem actually spoke to me...
quite honestly..i've been waiting almost two years now
for a mighty breakthrough for a friend whose right where
he needs to be...in jail on a $100,000 bond, with NO-ONE
offering any assistance period.
Finally!
The only bullshit he has to face....
is himself...no blaming anybody else...this time
just himself!
It's so damn exciting!
The "pinnacle point" in our lives, where we finally
stop the miserable excuses and blaming...
and say...
what the fuck?...i have nobody to blame, no-enablers
to rescue me, just...me!
It is so damn exciting!
loved your poem!
ears/SEattle
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"if i could do it all over,
i'd like to think i'd change.
alot of things.
most of all me."
I can identify. Ohhh yeah.
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well golly!!!
so you liked it huh? at least i realize what I have done. and i wish there was some things i could change. but i wonder if i really would? if given the chance... love gypsyfish
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Very sad but a powerful write. Good job at capturing the emotions that are pent up in so many people.
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The word "fuck," derives from the German ficken, to strike. So does your poem mean you are going to "strike" youself? This is a sad poem. Can I cheer you up? What would it take?
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goodknightpoet
yes, there is something you could do, have a good life, drink a beer, and smoke you a cig. and pray for me. ha/ha love gypsysish thanks for the comment on 'just born bad'
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AWESOME GYSPO
IM DOIN FINE
AND U BET IM STUDYIN...WHAT ELSE CAN I DO BUT THAT...LOL
HOPE TO HEAR FROM YA ALWAYS
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gypsy girl, I think I gotta song for you. Hang on I'm gonna go get the lyrics then send them to you.
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