Oh my love
they retold me that now I am a mature man
yet I yearned to persist as a minor
still nobody ratified me
I shouted and fingered wretched for parting
my sublime baby hood
in which I assimilated that the flowers are proficient
the birds are enchanting
the sky is aesthetic, the river is gifted
I spotted the acme in my boy hood
I was detrimentally truant of my angelic galaxy
until you billed and cooed me
and nabbed me to the universe of your scriptural comeliness
Oh my love...
A contest entry
- Inspire Me - I need some sunshine and cheering up by Seeking Peace.
450 points, ended September 8, 2007, 12 entries
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Ah that is the child within us all, something I wish to have back sometimes.... beautiful
Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you the very best of luck
Karen -
First love...
Never lose that childs heart, dear Poet...it has served you well I think, if it has inspired from you this beautiful romantic and loving write..."I yearned to persist"...well said, and I hope this wins a gold for you...Peace, Rhonda
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At the acme of "Romance Mountain"...
At the acme of "Romance Mountain", you appear to stand alone, setting a high standard for us to strive towards; wonderfully done. --Joe
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love this poem of yours. truly one i favor.
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beautiful write, nicely penned as always
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