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Waves thrashing
Water swaying high
Tossing the little boat
Here and there

Wouldn’t it be easier
To just jump overboard
And be swallowed up?

The pain would go
The fear, apprehension
Would just wash away
As the tide goes out

But the easy route
Isn’t always the best way
Sometimes you need to work

Work through the pain and fear
Tie things down and move them around
Whatever you need to do, you know it
To get back home safely

Once home, pack your bags
And move on, don’t look back
You’re free

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Sooo I haven't written a poem in awhile... I haven't written much at all in awhile... sooo this isn't very good. But I decided to try. Hope you like it.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    August 27, 2007
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    Great wise words in this piece. Beautifully penned.