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By Any Other Name(pw trick)

I want you now
More than ever
You ask what has changed
I tell you...time has passed
This makes me want you more
Don't ask why just accept it
I love you more
With each passing second
My love is a flower
That is always in bloom
There is no season
Or time of life
That I am not growing my roots deeper
And my leaves higher
My flower more beautiful
My petals softer
My love for you is a flower
And you my dear
Are my rose

Author notes

i am pretty sure this is already disqualified or if allowed it is as trusted as a french judge at a figure skating contest...so i know i won't win...but she is a rose and i uphold the main content of this poem is a rose...but all that aside it is like 15 lines...so i know i won't win but i would love to hear what you have to say...thank you for your time...i liked this contest
Written September 5th, 2003

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