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Lost in your eyes

The last of love came from fear
as did all others
I told myself enough
its ok to be alone
I made a promise to myself
to do it on my own
as scary as it was
one step then another
but then u came along
as caring as you are
you offered me a helping hand
and when I looked into your eyes
I found myself lost
for now I have you
I don't need to be alone
I wont so much to hold you
and collapse into your arms
hold me close forever
and never let me go
I am so tired and so afraid
because if you walk away
I'll have to start again
and I fear if I fall again
I may just not get up
so please don't walk away
please don't let me fall
and I will do my best for you
be the best that I can be

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  • oneal
    November 4, 2007

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    indeed, after the ending of a relationship we do have to start again. And at times it can be so hard to do so. your lines are good here.

    "I am so tired and so afraid
    because if you walk away
    I'll have to start again
    and I fear if I fall again
    I may just not get up
    so please don't walk away"

    This desperation is so geniune. I love it. You dare to love, to embrace but the fear of rejection is present.

    Love it, indeed.

    I share this fear at times, but the wonders of love overpowers the growth of such fears.

    your friend

    Oneal

  • buffy02
    November 1, 2007
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    i really love this one... cause u no i can relate


  • angel-lover
    November 1, 2007
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    very sweet

    a nice one great stuff.