Good side:
A friendly humanitarian
Always wanting to help
Always willing to offer advice
Creative and timid
A left-brained person
Ambitious and always thinking of the past
Looking to it for help with the future
All that is wanted is good for the world
I'll fight for a cause
Even my own
Bad side (we all have a bad side):
This water bearer can be secretive
It is not difficult to hide behind a frivolous cloak
Obstructed by a mental gaurd
That keeps me inside
And leaves others outside
May stop me at times from being myself
A brutally independent self
Amalgamated with shyness
Is often mistaken for coldness
By those who may not understand
That we just need some time
To break away from our zones.
Facts:
I dislike promises and being alone.
Author notes
This was just a quick one for me because I don't enter enough contests. Maybe I'll revise this one when I have sometime.
A contest entry
- What's Your Sun Sign? by queens1.
900 points, ended August 9, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Aquarians unite!
This is half-true, since I'm an Aquarius-Pisces cusp, so I inherited some traits from the other sign as well. This is pretty neat... Well done! -
Well balanced
I think you did a fine job, you still have two weeks to tweek it if you like. My mother is Aquarius, but I only saw her good side.
Thank you for entering and good luck!
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