Merry Go Round of emotions
feelings that have been felt before
Rotating images as seen
through the eyes of ones heart and soul
Faces replaced by another
A contest entry
- QUICKIE by Lyre-Bird-.
390 points, ended August 1, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This makes me think, being on a Merry Go Round, and if I let go, questions prompt...things will go flying off out of control, and when will it stop, will everything be found that has fallen off, where has it all landed..where will I land, will I be able to stand and balance myself...you know...it's amazing how thought provoked this has me...
I am likely interpreting it in different ways than others, maybe, but I suppose it's all about the reader and their state of mind?
I don't know, I always love reading your stuff because you know I can relate and you know that it helps me to know that I'm not crazy and others have been there. And even though you know all that, I told you again anyway Because I like to ramble
Thank you ♥
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THIS IS SO CLEVER! WOW
I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE YOU CLEVER GIRL!
HUGS MOONY
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A virtual cornucopia of feelings meander by. Following through life to be given to one then another as the feelings stay the same but the places and people change.
Well done and congrats on the HM.
Mouser
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Haha, great minds think alike!
I swear I haven't read yours til now! The last line adds so much power to an already emotional piece. Very well done. Best of luck to you and, thank you for the wonderful comment.
Bella
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Thank you for entering the contest........
Love the opening line 'merry go round
great write
Great take on the prompt
Wish you the best of the luck.....
Tracey
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