Look in the mirror
What do u see?
Do you see what I see?
Or do you see what you believe
Look into your eyes
Do you see the fire that flashes?
Or do you see dull lifeless eyes
That have been forgotten
Do you let your heart?
Cry out in the night suffering in silence
As the darkness closes down on it
As it is slowly consumed
Do u look down at your hands?
See wonders of healing?
Or do your see scared hands
That tho heal are left in the dark
Do u listen to you soul
As it calls to those depressed
Hoping to help them
But they won’t let you
Do you stay up all night in your room?
Punishing yourself
Isolated from those you love
Sick of yourself
Do u look in the mirror?
And see the angel who looks back
Do you really see yourself?
The light in the shadow
That we all live in
Author notes
Contest THE BIGGEST OPTION CONTEST YOU WILL EVER SEE ][ im away for a whole week next week..so be kind and enter please..or ill hunt you down and stalk you][ by Rainbow Angel Char
option 2
words used from word bank
Mirror
Dark
Angel
Fire
Soul
Heart
Eyes
Hands
Darkness
Light
Shadow
Depressed
Forgotten
Isolated
In a list
A contest entry
- THE BIGGEST OPTION CONTEST YOU WILL EVER SEE ][ im away for a whole week next week..so be kind and enter please..or ill hunt you down and stalk you][ by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
600 points, ended August 12, 2007, 41 entries
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This is really beautiful written sweety.
Do you let your heart?
Cry out in the night suffering in silence
As the darkness closes down on it
As it is slowly consumed
Thank you for sharing
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beautifully written! This really reminded me of when I look at my own reflection. As far as I can remember, I could never see myself as I really am. People always tell me that I'm really pretty and that I'm skinny too. I however see myself as ugly and fat. I have finally learned to listen to everyone else and trust them when they give me compliments. This poem beautifully portrays the distorted self image that many people have. I really really like this piece a lot!
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I loved this hunni, i really loved this. i look and see the scars, but im trying to change that, what do you see my dear?
good luck in the contest, if you dont place im gonna have to make a contest only for this poem so you get a trophy!!!
Claire-Anne -
wow sis...did you take my mind and heart and put it down in words for me?
because this was just wonderful and was exactly how i felt and think
this was beautifal and you used the words wonderfully
wow
i mean wow
this contest is going to be hard to judge lol
this was just amaing
i totally loved it
well done sis
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woweezers
that is just wonderful ,ur poems just get better and better i love it -
omg omg wow you have to write a book you just got to
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