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Fly to my world

Try

and fly,

to my world.

Candy land swirls,

wrapped lollipop joys

with some cinnamon toys.

Clouds of pink cotton candy

bubble-gum flavors just dandy.

Teddy bears all dripping with honey,

flying with fairies, swift furry bunnies.

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Purples and pinks are blue silvery shows

and pixies float by, counting their toes.

Peek-a-boo and hide – then - go-seek

games just for you do not peek.

There are ~liquorish~ ropes

to lasso your hopes.

Wishes a must

fairy dust.

So fly,

try.

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Double Etheree 

Class assignment for Etheree Experiments
Taught by: thelordreigns

 

Bkgrd tile by Dove: free to use on AP  

 

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  • lianonsidhe silver member
    October 19, 2008

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    Beautiful!!! Sums up my childhood days very well!! Such lovely imagery. This one brought a smile. Thank you for sharing!


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    March 14, 2008

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    Hood Wink!!

    Gorgeous, I could see this being recited to children and the smiles it would bring, I love the Etheree form and to add rhyme was sensational,well done

    Karen


  • The Poetic Angel
    August 1, 2007

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    butiful !! a perfik childrens poem and a awsome background and the double etheree looks like the eyes of the clown ..brill.. xxx cheeky xxx


  • queen Moderators member
    August 1, 2007

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    Wow, i am amazed this is fantastic.

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