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Dance of the Lycanthrope

Spinning in the radiant moonlight
like a dark hulking
whirling Dervish,
the creature,
in all of his musky primeval glory,
had no fears or concerns
on this particular night

because, in this pristine
and secluded
high mountain meadow,
its safety and anonymity
would be cautiously risked
once again
to give thanks.

Crisp alpine air
pure and intoxicating,
seemed to magnify
the virtually cloudless
and brilliant star-studded sky
which nearly upstaged
the neon lunar brilliance

as he danced in celebration of;
health, strength, longevity
and an abundance of food
for his family,
whom he cared for greatly
as they were all
that he had.

Humankind’s myths and legends
were far from his
two-century-old mind as he
paused for a moment to inhale the
invigorating coolness into his massive lungs
only to begin again, spinning
in the radiant moonlight.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • LoveGoneMad
    January 20

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    Wow

    Great write
    you've successfully painted a vivid picture, it flows beautifully, it's clear & easy to understand...


  • Abstract Image
    November 19, 2008
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    what option is this?


  • chilali
    November 14, 2008

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    Ooh! Nicey nice! I love this. Congrats on the Silver.


  • Ryan79
    November 12, 2008

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    Great Poem

    This one really catches the imagination. I love mythical monsters and stuff. It is a really great image that you creat in the poem. Werewolves are just cool, what can I say?


  • Claudia Incognito
    August 23, 2007

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    I just love mythical creatures. Lycanthropes are so interesting. Reminds me of this time two years ago if you did the report and read it you'd get two grades and if you didnt read it you'd have to write five interesting things about them. One was I learned what Lycanthropy was. no one could spell it. Well, it was an interesting poem. I just love the imagery and all that good stuff. -_- <3


  • Violent Serenity
    August 11, 2007

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    oh very nice and entrancing write! i love the style you used, very well done. keep it up and good luck in the contest!


  • XInsanity-FairX
    August 2, 2007

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    i liked it...i like the imagery and feeling within it...you can almost see what's happeneing...almost feel the breeze...well done and good luck in my contest


  • emeraldsoldier
    August 1, 2007

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    not bad

    well i think it was alright regardless of what you normaly write. it paints a vivid picture and flows well. you should try and deviate from your normal path every now aand then.

    keep it up.
    emeraldsoldier

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