Mirror Mirror on the wall,
Points out all of my fucking flaws.
Shows the blood on my clothes,
And the powder in my nose.
Track lines going down my arms,
Keep me from causing harm.
To myself and all my friends,
For isn't that God's command.
To love thy neighbor and thine self,
No matter how bad your mental health.
For as I look in the mirror,
I see my eye shed a single tear.
Not because I am sad,
But for I know that I am bad.
No one should live like me,
A selfish full I tis be.
Author notes
Mirror Mirror
A contest entry
- Mirror Mirror by Ignis Corpus.
500 points, ended August 1, 2007, 40 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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damn....this is awsome!!
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Wonderful
Baby doll, you always are really good at writing poetry. I wish I had half the talent you have. You amaze me more and more everyday. Keep up the awesome writing. I hope you never decide to quit writing because this is one of the many things in life that I wait for. A new poem from my one and only.
You rock sweet cheeks.
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Track lines going down my arms,
Keep me from causing harm.
To myself and all my friends,
For isn't that God's command.
I liked those lines very much. This poems flow was very good.Over the poem was well written, and excellent. I wish you the best of luck in this contest.
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