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Dear Baby!

Dear Baby in the Womb,
    Why did you kick me today?
I know, you just want to come out and play!
Honey it's not time,  you need to stay for awhile.
Oh my God, I just keep tasting the bile.
I'm sick every morning, noon & night.
One consolation you still can't bite.
But, mommy is looking forward to your first cry.
We still have five more months to go....sigh.
I wish your daddy could do this for awhile.
See you soon.
Mommy

Author notes

I have six children, two of which is twins. I know all about carrying a baby for nine months. Loved it! Those tiny fingers and toes are the most amazing thing in the world. How exciting for your family, enjoy! And, God bless you all.

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  • lucy sky-diamond
    August 29, 2007

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    lol this is a very sweet poem
    if only men could know what us women go through for almost a year, though its all worth it in the end
    wonderful write, thanks for sharing

    lucy
    x-o-x


  • CarCrashHumor
    August 11, 2007
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    haha this made me laugh

    "I wish your daddy could do this for awhile"

    that was perfect


  • Yellow Sharpie
    August 6, 2007
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    so cute

    I didn't expect this approach, but it is very funny! nice write!