God how do you like it, i write it, recite it and wait for you to ignite it. Lord i cain't fight it; ma arms are to short to box. your will be done, i'm just your lil' son. Your infinite so why am i settle'n' for ceilings. I hope you feeling what i'm sayin' and the way i'm relayin'; you walked on this earth too, so i know you relatin'.
Just let your Love rain on me till the pain is gone. And this is 9/11, so i hope you in heaven singin' the same song. if you is than i'm on track, record then play it back, so i can hear what you sayin' and jot down more facts. This jus a note to you.
This what i'm supposed to do?
Kings take the crown.
But if it was an election I would vote for You!
ma boys like, what you up to Lu?
Man i'm jus copin' duke.
and if i got more in depth i'd tell'em
that i'd hope for truth.
i pray for light shine, so i will never smother another brothers if he don't mess wit mine. This jus whats on ma mind, i once was livin' fine, until the pressures of this world came crumbling down on mine.
Nothin' fabricated, i jus debated on how much you could dig. I know you understand, so latter overstand the kid..........
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Written September 4th, 2003
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What's up babygirl? You know never to quit rappin...you are good. Hope to see you soon man. I miss ya'll up there. ~Blessed Be~
~Vampy~
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Great!
This is a bold rap, put it in verse stanzas, and it will be awesome.
Welcome to AP.
I'm Renee, my screen name is **~Poetryality~**, and a.k.a. MotherRapper, cause I'm a mother that raps.
Check out my author page, and if you need any help you can call on me.
Again, welcome to AP we be jammin'!
Hold on, the ride is rough sometimes.
Add me to your favorites list when you come to my page ~Poetryality~ that's me, I'm from Cleveland.
OHIO in the house, madamcb is from Cleveland too, Lovespoon is from Cincinnatti. God bless!
Renee
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really kewl
this makes wonderful rap, makes a change from the usual subject matter for that artform. you (or Patience) should add 'lyrics' as a category to it, cos i read it 3 times (in my head!), i'm sure it raps!
totally fresh and original take on spirituality
totally fresh and original prayer
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Written By Patience!!!
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Classic
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