Frozen tears, upon lily white cheeks,
her chocolate curls tangled about her face.
Hunting what she's become had been her life,
the only way she had ever lived,
nothing else had she known.
Never loved, never held,
never allowed to be afraid.
Yet now her fear ate at her soul.
yearning for her to be free of what now she is.
She knew nowhere else to go,
but to go back to him.
A Lover from long ago,
Long since turned, before she had even known,
the only one she let live.
Fleeing from those she once called friends,
into his arms once again.
Bearing her into the Vault, 'neath the ground,
Taking her to her Graveyard Sanctuary.
Author notes
Option 3 "the graveyard Sanctuary"
Vampire of Thought (aka VoT)
I know you said not to use the option in the title, but it seemed fitting, I hope I didn't step on your toes!
This, if you've read any of my Storywrite stuff, is a poetry form of the end of La chasseresse de la Nuit. I haven't written her end, yet, and this is one of many ideas.
Bon Apetit, Madamoiselle MyTearsFalling, and all of mon ami's reading this.
A contest entry
- Options: come and see! by raven-ink.
300 points, ended August 1, 2007, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - MY HUMONGOUSLY AWESOME KINDAH FANTASY CONTEST! by HarvesterOfHearts.
700 points, ended September 7, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Group Contest for Fellow Dark and Horror Writers of all Skill Levels Group Members by Lord Merlynn.
300 points, ended November 19, 2007, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
it's good very good keep writing
-
a nice write from the unique perspective. To think, that even an undead can have feelings of love and belonging? A great piece, dark, and full of emotion.
-
this is a very good piece. interesting that she must forget all that she had been to protect herslef. to go back to the one that she wished she had not. thanks for sharing
-
Excellant/morbid/strange
A rather intriguing write tho somewhat sorrowful. I enjoyed it just as it is. Again, well done. -
beautifal
this is a beautifally written peice. it is so dark, so sad.
wat sticks out for this peice most for me is the imagery, it's such a descriptive peice... you feel as though you're hovering above the scene.
good luck!
~lostelvenchild
-
Very nice. I felt it
-
it's fine that you have it in your title!!! I completely agree about it being fitting. It's just when people just do that and then write about something random. It was a very good poem and I thgough it to be a great write! Keep up the good work
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
