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Nightmare

Lain across my death bed
Voices crying throughout my head
I don’t know who I am anymore
Nothing seems to make sense
And these wretched cuts just make it worse
Splitting cuts that burst at the seams
Bleeding everything out of me
Forcing the people I love to leave
Dying alone, nothing but complete solitude
Vicious chilling paralyses my thoughts
I’m not sure what to think
I’m beginning to forget how to feel
I want to be a child again
Please someone wake me up
Tell me this nightmare isn’t real

BY: Corey Klosterman

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  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    December 25, 2007
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    almost the same feeling, although i have only cut once.


  • unchained fears
    August 1, 2007

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    the nightmare is the real thing! the world sux, and most of the people in it are not worth a thing. people lie, cheat, and steal form the ones they "love". i just got out of the hospital not long ago. another suicide attempt. i'm now forced to go to therapy. and everyone is pretending it didn't happen, like this wasn't my second failed attempt to kill myself. i'm sorry this was just what i thought about after reading this.
    *unchained*