screams
chains
brother
torture
pleasure
pain
raped
beaten
window
baby
He pinned me to the bed,
with handcuffs in hand.
Tried a chain arounded my neck,
and tried to choke me to death.
You got pleasure from my pain,
I got tortured from your rage.
You beat me with,
the belt around your waist.
My brother herd my screams,
and came and though you out the window.
I thought it was all over,
but 9 mounths later came our baby boy.
written at 8:43 P.M.
written on July 31st, 2007
person who did this to me Tomas James Grizbe
our six yoear old son name is Timothy James Grizbe
and my brother who saved me was Ronald Gean Moore
Author notes
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Another disturbing one, A bad story and a memory that I wish you didn't have. Great expression.
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this was a sad poem a i live everyday to help make think better for you i hate that he did this this was a great write keep it up
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Wow, what a frightening situation
for someone to find himself in.
I am very sorry that you had to
endure such pain and heartache.
I wish you all the best and hope
that you are well now. This poem
is very raw and sad. It's a terrible
thing that this type of behavior
happens every day in our world.
Thanks for sharing this one here!
Jeremy0826 -
this poem screams raw emotion, you can see what this evil person done too you, so it that sense i would say that it is full of image, all be distressing imagery it is verry good, keep writing it will help ease the suffering inside
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"My brother herd *heard* my screams,
and came and though you out the window."
ust a suggestion hun... "my brother heard my screams,came running... tho you escaped before hand out my window."
but besides this it was a good piece, lots of description went into this. thanks for sharing really.
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Excellent write!!! I really liked the format... I am so sorry about what happened to you, but something good came out of all that bad, your son!!!!!!!! So emotion filled, I started to cry!!!!! So filled with pain!!!! I hope you have put this behind you and gone on with your life and your son... I enjoyed this read, even-though it was painful to read, it was great!!!!!
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So sad
I hope you are away from him and your brother was a saint for coming to your rescue . You kept your son and I hope you can find the way to make a happy home now . May I ask you why you named your child after his father was there a reason for that. I am so glad you kept your son and raising him for it takes a real woman to know and keep him for he is part of you to .
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HOLY MOLY!!!!! This is a powerful write indeed! I can relate to some of this, and know the pain and courage it took you to write it.
But you did a great job on it.
Love ya
Auntie
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