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Save me

I was afraid to say something wrong,
so I said nothing at all.
I was afraid you wouldn't catch me
if I should fall.
I needed you,
and now your back.
I love you so much.
I'm glad we could make this work....
But answer me this,
If you love me...and still want to have sex....
then why are you engaged to that skinny little heffer???

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Written September 4th, 2003

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  • sammi
    September 4, 2003
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    this is a funny poem. i like the ending, it's very surprising. i liked how you didnt bore ppl about the ending by simply saying skinny little heffer??? thats just great. lol! great job. that guy is a dumbass-no offense or anything.

    sammi


  • InvisibleMan silver member
    September 4, 2003
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    Cute...the ending was a real surprise. I was NOT expecting anything like that at all. Interesting the way reality can be so dream-like sometimes. I love you but I'm marrying HER. Yeah....that makes sense!